Introduction,Practise essay

In the novel Animal Farm written by George Orwell, Napoleon is a promising candidate to lead and run the farm and make sure the farm is better than it was for the animals, But Napoleon starts to abuse his power. Napoleon has figured out that he is smarter than all the other animals and can read and write which the other animals cant do.

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Remember to start by focusing on what the question is asking you to do specifically. In this instance you are asked to describe the character at the beginning and the end of the novel, then outline how they changed. You have outlined some great points that could serve as good starts to body paragraphs but have not fully addressed the question being asked. Good start, it just need to be developed a little more.

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